Precious Time Take Me Poem by Okim Otu

Precious Time Take Me

Rating: 5.0


Precious time take me
take me to whence kids gathered
under the glowing moon,
round the burning fire
listening to the elderly
telling stories of history

I have been suffocated
Suffocated by the smoke and enduring sounds
Of my neighbors generator
My sanity Impeded
Impeded by the noise of social media
And my creativity is in doubt.

Take me where alongside the flames arose;
Images that fashioned new frames of art,
Thoughts that brewed bottles of poetic rhymes,
Sounds that cooked delicious pots of new songs
and moves that molded new steps of African dance
Precious time take me.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The advance of technology in our present generation is affecting our creativity negatively. This poem is a reminisce of the olden days when kids gathered around fireplace listening to the elderly, nowadays we press phones and watch all sorts of stuff on TV.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 22 June 2022

what a nice write dear Otu! ! .5 stars.

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Okim Otu 23 June 2022

Thank you for your comment

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