(((Precious Time - 3))) Tanka Comments

yes true love bring and contentment...................Truly described.............Good Write.............10+++........

Beautiful Marvin...nothing else I can say...thank you...Fi

This(IMO) , is arguably be the most unique dscription of something that each of us, especially as writers hold so dear....images...memories, of those very special moments in our lives...What impresses me most about this piece, Marvin, and is the reason thai commendate it as 'most unique' is that the piece is quite succinct....YET..... in those mere 21 words....You say all, that needs to be said! Excellent Writing, my friend! F j R 2009