Time waits for no one like the flower that will soon fade away
Spend some moments with loved ones before the end of the day
Have a long talk with friends and chat about the good old times
Pick up a book and read to a child or sing some nursery rhymes
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I love the sentiment but I don't think the first stanza fits together with the other three. I think the first stanza would be better as another poem perhaps dealing more with children. However the rest of the stanzas fit very well together and are just wonderful. great write.
Save and cherish each precious moment as if it were to be your last It too will be just a memory and another thing belonging to the past beautiful and breathtaking bravo
Save and cherish each precious moment as if it were to be your last It too will be just a memory and another thing belonging to the past lovely lines and a great poem steeped in wisdom! ! !
Enjoyed the wonderful advice doled out to make life more rewarding and meaningful! If we can bring in some cheer in another's life, it gives us a lot of satisfaction! After all this life is short and a preparation for a greater life! Imbibed the lofty message contained in this great poem! !
a very philosiphical poem...every line that u have penned down is indeed a fact, , , enjoyed reading every line of it!
A beautiful philosophy for life. Should get the job done. Filled with heart and compassion and so well done
A great didactic poem with wonderful style of rhyme and rhythm is soul- stirring, Patricia! Beautiful!
I love the soul you poured in this poem, it has my piece in this write, i speak to me, like i speak to myself everyday..just like it too much, somehow it has some personal matters to me...as if you write it unwritten and it then written to me for myself_Soul
Excellent poem Patricia, loaded with great advices and philosophy.
Wisdom at its best, your words are heard deeply by me and I hope they touch an abundance of people. Life is so short, I'm so happy you wrote this poem Patricia.....