Preciosa Comments

btw preciosa means precious. :) srry i took so long... about a years time.... lol

beautiful attempt of capturing emotions yet, being low on GK plz tell whats Preciosa?

Ana, this is a really good piece of writing. You seem to have a flare for alliteration and know how and where to use it. This poem has a great beat to it and the second stanza is a real imaginative piece of writing. Admittedly I did not like the lines: 'Not caring of this world, Slowly losing your sanity' They seem a bit awkwards to me and they seem to take aay the sort of romanticism of the rest of the poem, but reading it without those line it still maintains great flow.