Tuesday, August 30, 2011

Pre-Possessive Comments

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She rides threw verses on motor-sicles,
And dental limericks as a drill;
If novelty you crave, she'll be your knave-
Dragging you up the hill.
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Patti Masterman
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Eric Cockrell 30 August 2011

very well done... you cut with a surgical sword!

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Jim Troy 30 August 2011

Sometimes a harsh message is the ones that do the most good.... A well written poem from a wonderful poet and friend Jim Troy

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