I remember how anxious you were
to be free
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A beautiful poem nicely put together. Congrats on your poem's selection as member POD
Once I figured out where each sentence began and ended, I 'loved' the poem, ...but it was aggravating once or twice because the author neglected to capitalize the start and punctuate the end of each sentence.: ( bri
Beautiful poem on "A mother's love, " exquisite. Congratulations for POD for a second time for the same poem.
amazing poem every mother to be has to read this Bravo!
CONGRATUATIONS being chosen TWICE. Truly a cute Masterpiece. Mothers who have given birth, see themselves lying here, with their husbands too, exactly the same, only YOU wrote this tender touching Masterpiece
you'd grow quiet as he ever so gently stroked my bulging tummy and you.. Beautiful and lovely expressions of endearing love……. such a fine theme.. thank u. tony
A nice poetic presentation of fruit of love, Adiela. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
A one of a kind write that vividly depicts the bond of a father, mother and child. Beautifully crafted and well executed. Congratulations!
Hearty congratulations on MPOD selection! The poem is unique in the sense that it reflects on love not only between an unborn baby and his/her mother, but also among the three, father included. Loved this sweet bonding and the sweet thoughts of the poetess.
A lovely poem of the bonding that happens before birth between parents and baby.
PS. There is a wrong word in my response. Please read BELIVED family as BELOVED family. Thank you so much. At this same moment, it is worth to read this poem time and again, from the angle you have done. Once again, true excellent poetic idea.
Congratulations being Member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! We are glad and happy for you to have this very special poem chosen. You created upon another vision, loveliest, dear Poetess. Excellently done! Keep creating and writing, whenever there is time. I have enjoyed this loveliest worded poem. God's Blessings for you and your belived family. A 10 and much much more for the voting.
Moving away from customary thinking, love between the mother, father and the child is taken to a quite different plateau. Lovely. Congrats on your positioning and thanks for sharing.X
The moving viewpoint is so well handled as the poem moves from the placenta, to the mother and the father. Thus the combined bond the strength of the last line. 'then we'd both drift off to sleep' Well done Adiela, a close by.poet.
How beautiful a picture of life, its creation and nurturing!
In the epic Mahabharat it is described that Abhimanyu learnt the complicated art of warfare when he was in his mother's womb listening to his father Arjun describing those complex warfare to Uttara, Abhimanyu's mother. Congratulations for being selected as the Poem of the Day.
That's beautiful.