Tuesday, November 20, 2018

Pre-Natal Comments

Rating: 4.6

I remember how anxious you were

to be free
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Adiela Akoo
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Denis Mair 21 November 2023

That's beautiful.

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Chinedu Dike 19 September 2022

A beautiful poem nicely put together. Congrats on your poem's selection as member POD

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Bri Edwards 19 September 2022

Once I figured out where each sentence began and ended, I 'loved' the poem, ...but it was aggravating once or twice because the author neglected to capitalize the start and punctuate the end of each sentence.: ( bri

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Nabakishore Dash 19 September 2022

Congrats revered Akoo.

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 18 September 2022

Beautiful poem on "A mother's love, " exquisite. Congratulations for POD for a second time for the same poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 September 2022

amazing poem every mother to be has to read this Bravo!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 September 2022

CONGRATUATIONS being chosen TWICE. Truly a cute Masterpiece. Mothers who have given birth, see themselves lying here, with their husbands too, exactly the same, only YOU wrote this tender touching Masterpiece

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Suresh Kumar Ek 15 September 2020

Poetic touch of the motherly care

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 January 2019

you'd grow quiet as he ever so gently stroked my bulging tummy and you.. Beautiful and lovely expressions of endearing love……. such a fine theme.. thank u. tony

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Adiela Akoo 12 April 2019

Thank you Tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 January 2019

A nice poetic presentation of fruit of love, Adiela. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Adiela Akoo 12 April 2019

Thank you Jazib

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 January 2019

A one of a kind write that vividly depicts the bond of a father, mother and child. Beautifully crafted and well executed. Congratulations!

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Adiela Akoo 16 January 2019

Thank you so very much Rose

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Khairul Ahsan 14 January 2019

Hearty congratulations on MPOD selection! The poem is unique in the sense that it reflects on love not only between an unborn baby and his/her mother, but also among the three, father included. Loved this sweet bonding and the sweet thoughts of the poetess.

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Adiela Akoo 16 January 2019

Thank you Khairul

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Jennifer Birchall 14 January 2019

A lovely poem of the bonding that happens before birth between parents and baby.

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Adiela Akoo 16 January 2019

Thank you Jennifer

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 January 2019

Daily Routine! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Adiela Akoo 16 January 2019

My pleasure Edward

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 January 2019

PS. There is a wrong word in my response. Please read BELIVED family as BELOVED family. Thank you so much. At this same moment, it is worth to read this poem time and again, from the angle you have done. Once again, true excellent poetic idea.

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Adiela Akoo 16 January 2019

Thank you once again, Sylvia. Gods blessings upon you and yours too

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 January 2019

Congratulations being Member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! We are glad and happy for you to have this very special poem chosen. You created upon another vision, loveliest, dear Poetess. Excellently done! Keep creating and writing, whenever there is time. I have enjoyed this loveliest worded poem. God's Blessings for you and your belived family. A 10 and much much more for the voting.

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Adiela Akoo 16 January 2019

Thank you so much Sylvia. Much appreciated :)

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 14 January 2019

Moving away from customary thinking, love between the mother, father and the child is taken to a quite different plateau. Lovely. Congrats on your positioning and thanks for sharing.X

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Adiela Akoo 16 January 2019

Thank you Jayatissa. My pleasure

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Adrian Flett 14 January 2019

The moving viewpoint is so well handled as the poem moves from the placenta, to the mother and the father. Thus the combined bond the strength of the last line. 'then we'd both drift off to sleep' Well done Adiela, a close by.poet.

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Adiela Akoo 16 January 2019

Thank you Adrian for your kind review

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Ruta Mohapatra 14 January 2019

How beautiful a picture of life, its creation and nurturing!

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Adiela Akoo 16 January 2019

Thank you Ruta

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Bharati Nayak 14 January 2019

In the epic Mahabharat it is described that Abhimanyu learnt the complicated art of warfare when he was in his mother's womb listening to his father Arjun describing those complex warfare to Uttara, Abhimanyu's mother. Congratulations for being selected as the Poem of the Day.

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Adiela Akoo 16 January 2019

Thank you. Yes, education certainly begins in the womb

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