Pre-History Comments

really cool, lots of thoughts.........good job

Excellent and strong poem. You have said it well.

powerful... Alf

dear sulaiman...your ones are short, but those words speaks a lot 'Or perhaps, I’d just bury the brain. End of genocide' and I like your expressions too..nice 10++

'O King of all kinds what a miracle you have made in a piece of muscle and blood the angel is here, the devil is here to manipulate the mind within' - asif I have read both of your poems and i simply cay say bravo to both, thanks for sharing 10++++++ and A++++++ rgds asif

From: The Prophet Leland Wright (Washington DC United States; Male; 16) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 5/29/2009 3: 45: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: Re: Re: hi leland okay i read both of the poems as usual its all great i kinda like 'pre-history' more but idk why. Awesome poems man i really hard to be a critic towards your poems cause i mean its nothing wrong with them they're just good

firstly..... amazing piece. you really make me realise....... i like it from the start till the end although its a short poem.... overall no bet im gonna give 5/5 stanza....

And if the heart reigns it transcends the superficial mind into a tool of heaven. like in my poem the will of the heavens you should read it sometime its on page 2 Angelgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

Well written its like i can see what you really think in your mind :) 10

We often wonder about the uselessness of a mayhem. But when it evokes a creation of an art piece or beautiful poem, we astound at what mayhem exists for. Very well written, friend.

Yes that is true in a way, some good time might come. good piece.10

touching verses lead the mind to be in the same place well expressed..10++++

Genocide is the systematic destruction, or a mass killing to every groups, racials and etc...your piece has the details of it..it is recorded...naizz

In my opinion, fear is at the basis of perpetrated horrors against humans and animals/creatures. Self-saturating dogma satisfies the fear, feeds our egos and justifies separating from others, killing them, ad infinitum. Basic rule of psychology is to get to the root of the fear. We have invented 'isms' to protect ourselves, set us apart, keep us from doing the necessary work to understand the causes of fears which have kept us living as tribes. We know that the mind can be retrained, redirected, and it can easily learn new concepts. Only way any of that can take place is to have all of us face our fears and admit to them. Little by little, working consciously, accepting our faults and weaknesses, loving ourselves, yes, we can remove the drama and unite and be filled with universal love and caring.

interesting write well done...................

yeh yeh your right right now there are some here whose brains I would love to rip open just to see how a phychopath works-- yours is an introspection wowwwwwwwwwww a great one certainly a ++++++10 from meeeeeeeeee anjuuuuuuuu

Emotion stripped to the bare bones. Excellent write, Suliaman. Warm regards, Sandra

Fantastically fascinating.. welcome bk again

From: Mary Spain (United Kingdom ;) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 5/25/2009 2: 34: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: hi mary dear You're quite right, Sulaiman, we're a rotten and destructive lot - how strange that we can write such fine poetry! Mary

Excellent! ! ...what a strong poem! ! .....I like this line'If I could rip open my brain and alter the egism....'.....well written....Merna