Tuesday, December 16, 2014

Pre-Destination Comments

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Every night, as i close my eyes
in the quietness of my room
waiting for sleep to kick in
as I lay almost lifeless in my bed
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Lubinda Lubinda
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Spock The Vegan 16 December 2014

A nice poem. Between to trains should be Between two trains. things should be thing's because it means thing is. See my poem what If...

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