Saturday, January 10, 2009

Pre-Birth: The Peace Within Comments

Rating: 4.8

The warmth, the calm, ...The peace within
The eagerness, the push, the wish to live
To share, to love, Together and free
Alas! ... In tears, I came to be.
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Fred Omorogbe
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Leslie Ching 27 January 2009

if the world were like this today, it would be a much better place to be...with 'peace throughout the land' (quoted from a song) ...lc

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Joscelyn Alderdice 26 January 2009

This something we all wish we could do, but men are corrupt. Even when there is a little hope something else brings it down. This is a great poem :)

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Ivor Hogg 16 January 2009

If Only it could be so

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C. P. Sharma 16 January 2009

....out burst to break the shacles of taboos..... CP

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Ency Bearis 16 January 2009

strong words as an advocate against atrocity..well narrated..

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Jim Norausky 15 January 2009

Fred, Powerful poem. You have brougt to this site a dimension not appreciated by many because many have not endured the human injustices experienced in your part of the world. Thank you so much for making those images visible to us. God Bless. Jim

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