Monday, June 22, 2009

Praying To Be Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here i am, looking to the stars
Remembering everything i used to be,
Now i don't know who i was
What happened to the old me.
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Dana Amer
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Afzal Shauq 27 June 2009

No, i'm not that girl anymore I have changed to a worse person, The more i think about it, it hurts more I feel i am another someone. you seem to me very sensitive poet and looking in the depth of issues.. your poem is heart feeling one and rich in idea and sure impressive a lot too...10+++++++++++

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awarm poem for weeping lost souls but no you are still you..the gold do not change..well done

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