Wednesday, November 4, 2020

Prayers For A Lonely Soul Comments

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Prayers For A Lonely Soul
I stumbled across a lonesome post
Among the hosts of others,
On a Facebook Group page,
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Khairul Ahsan
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Susan Williams 20 November 2020

Such a lovely thing to do, Khairul. You mat never know the ripples that such a kindness might create not only in her heart but also in others. We all might need a little help from a stranger to get through these days of the year 2020. Top marks for this poem and for your heart and soul

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 16 November 2020

a heart touching piece...full credit

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Khairul Ahsan 01 December 2020

@Sankhajit Bhattacharjee, Thanks for your appreciation of my poem, @Sankhajit Bhattacharjee.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2020

This Poem is so touchingly and impressively delineated. Loneliness is much painful that can't be expressed in words. This poem is your warmest dedication to Ruby Rashid, a friend in your Facebook. Thank you sir for sharing this beautiful poem. Five stars.

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Yiyan Han 14 November 2020

What a sympathetic and tender heart you have! However, I did find some fakes online so just beware. But this doesn't stop me going online.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 December 2020

@Yiyan Han, 'But this doesn't stop me going online' - yes, I too go online and participate in social media activities, though I know they are fraught with the danger of hackers. Many thanks for your praise, I am highly inspired by your comment.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 November 2020

Yeah, sometimes loneliness becomes the killer if not take positively. Losing near and dear ones keeps one aloof from crowd. That is dangerous. We must support the person and help him. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem on loneliness.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 November 2020

A touching poem, so full of compassion. The poem also goes to show that you have a compassionate heart, Khairul Sahab! " I feel lonely, please pray for me' does pull the strings of your heart. I too, join you with prayers for this lonely soul. May God bless her with peace. Thank you so much for sharing this poem with us.............Top stars!

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Valsa George 09 November 2020

A sensitive heart can always feel others' pain! We read many things, but let them go! This woman's appeal who lost two of her dear ones at a row touched your heart deeply and you sent her timely consolation! Besides you have come up with a touching poem creating the same emotion in your readers that you felt when you read the two touching lines she had posted !

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 November 2020

i wwas on fb once then i abandoned read my two poems Moms Smiles and When in Loneliness Think of Me if teas don't wet your eyes tell me o pOet sir

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 November 2020

Lonesome post! Hope and dreams! Better days ahead. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bri Edwards 07 November 2020

3 - And i have suggestions for the last stanza, but your meaning is clear. You are compassionate …(and MAYBE naive? She may have wanted some warm words, but her story may not be true) . You are a good person. ;) bri ;) Nice Poet's Notes to MyPoemList

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Bri Edwards 07 November 2020

2 – st.5 " Because of its naivety" Why use " naivety" **? ** Though i Googled and found varying definitions (& spellings) , " naivety" seems to simply mean: " trust based on not having much experience" . (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 07 November 2020

1 - line 6: You used " many a" [an idiom] " many a (something) " [means] " Many. Always followed by a singular noun. Many a man has tried to vanquish the beast, but none have succeeded" st.5 " The lonesome post touched me deep." I'd use " deeply" . (cont.)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 November 2020

To put oneself in the shoes of others and feel their pains are acts of kindness/ empathy. Reaching a lonely soul and offering prayers for her are indeed noble acts. An act of compassion. A very heartwarming and thoughtful write. I concur with the wonderful comment of Lyn Paul. Your act is worthy of emulation. A well expressed and crafted poem. Five Stars! ! !

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Suresh Kumar Ek 07 November 2020

A poet should be empathetic always. He should be able to 'put on other's shirts' Thanks KhairulJi

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Khairul Ahsan 12 November 2020

I am much inspired by your two lines, @Suresh Kumar Ek. It's always a pleasure to have one's poem read by someone who knows how to appreciate. So, thank you too, for giving me this pleasure.

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 06 November 2020

beautiful piece on loneliness...10+

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Khairul Ahsan 15 December 2020

@Sankhajit Bhattacharjee, Thanks for the appreciation.

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Kevin Patrick 04 November 2020

Heartbreaking to read, I know several people like that on my fb, and on multiple groups, several I have contacted personally to know how well they are. This poem contains great compassion and empathy. It is good that you reached out to that lonely soul! we need light in darkness. A wonderful poem!

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Khairul Ahsan 15 December 2020

@Kevin Patrick, Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and experiences after reading this poem. You have rightly said, 'we need light in darkness' and may I add, just a few kind words of solace may emit rays of light in a dark tunnel to show the way to a perplexed soul. Humbled by the high praise you've accorded to my poem..

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Lyn Paul 04 November 2020

If only this world could bond together just as you have. Thank You

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Deluke Muwanigwa 04 November 2020

Thank you for feeling for another human being. Thats how it should be. No one need ever be alone as long you have access to cyberspace.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 December 2020

'No one need ever be alone as long you have access to cyberspace.' - Well said, @Deluke Muwanigwa, I quite agree with you. Much inspired by your appreciation of the poem, thank you.

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Kostas Lagos 04 November 2020

Loneliness is a heavy burden. Well written

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Khairul Ahsan 16 December 2020

'Loneliness is a heavy burden' indeed so! Thanks for sharing your thoughts, @Kostas Lagos.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 November 2020

‘I feel very lonely. Please pray for me.' -line of emotional urge prayer is the true companion of lonesome life!

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