Sunday, September 13, 2009

Prayer Walk Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feet crunch cracked mud uphill
Breaking a twig underfoot
While passengers take their pews
In the train speeding northwards
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Paul du Plessis
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Marieta Maglas 01 October 2009

It is an excellent architectural poem, a landscape of peace that excludes the war and the squalor, a metaphysical poem at the same time. The poet considered the space and time for the prayer, gained a measure of understanding, and came away expressing awe at a universal conception about the existence.Very well written poem.............10++++++++++

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