Wednesday, March 23, 2016

Prayer To Love Comments

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I searched for you in every crowd
and in the silent darkened places

in cities of the empty soul
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Barry Middleton
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Souren Mondal 23 March 2016

We all feel like this once in your lives about someone.. I have had a terrible experience in love.. I wasted a lot of my life loving the wrong person.. If only I were a little more sensible to know that the desire to have that one last kiss doesn't equal to have the woman back.. What's gone is gone, maybe for good, but those fleeting moments will always be there when we will want to have it.. Thanks Barry.. A beautiful poem.

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Barry Middleton 23 March 2016

The poem is a prayer to love as if love itself were a particular woman. I don't want any of my past loves back, I want a brand new one. At the same time I avoid it because for me it always ends the same. Love takes up too much time.

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Dimitrios Galanis 23 March 2016

So colourful painted the love for the lost loved.

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Barry Middleton 23 March 2016

Actually for all the women I thought I loved but lost anyway. My theory is I was just ill equipped for relationships. On the other hand it gives me lots of time to write poetry.

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