Tuesday, March 29, 2016

Prayer-Squirrel Comments

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O beloved goddess- - - - - - that brought us summer
Your bountiful spread- - - - - we'll always remember

We implore thee- - - - - - - - -to forever with us stay
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Loke Kok yee
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Simone Inez Harriman 24 June 2017

Laughing out loud with your delightful poem and the little squirrel. Praying for 'Lots of time for eating' tickled my fancy. Love it...10+++ for the big laugh this morning :) :)

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Loke Kok Yee 25 June 2017

Glad to have given you a laugh to start the day. Thanks Simone

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Bri Edwards 01 June 2016

I think I saw this squirrel yesterday while we were out driving around. Apparently Aine did NOT like something he said. The squirrel was buzzard bait. : ( Not a bad poem...... for a 'foreigner'! To MyPoemList. Bri :)

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Loke Kok Yee 02 June 2016

the buzzard gonna have a tummy ache! !

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Valsa George 07 April 2016

squirrels are such sprightly creatures. they give us joy........ as your poem does! a sweet prayer!

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Akhtar Jawad 02 April 2016

Divine goddess Aine- - - - - - - - - keep away the fall And bleak winter- - - - - -will then never have to call Just spring and summer- - - -and we'll all have a ball A wonderful prayer nicely penned.

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Kelly Kurt 29 March 2016

If it works, I would considering praying to her too. : -)

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