Thursday, April 7, 2016

Prayer-Slow Loris Comments

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No! No! I'm not praying, I'm an atheist you see
Rather embarrassing but I just fell from a tree

My legs not meant for walking and I'm slow on the floor
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Loke Kok yee
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Simone Inez Harriman 30 December 2017

I fear for the Slow Loris in this fast world of change you wonder how this little one survives. Hoping there will be a kind soul to return this little cutie back to his tree.

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Loke Kok Yee 03 January 2018

Don't worry Inez, he will be alright, Thanks for reading.

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Bri Edwards 29 January 2017

some Christians will imagine ANYTHING! ! ! (see Valsa's comment) . what predator would dine on such a cute critter? ME! legs' ? not in 'my book'. ok, maybe poetic license will allow it. bri :) lovely rhymes.

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Valsa George 19 April 2016

Though an atheist, he knows that God alone can save him from his peril and his hands are folded in prayer! Interesting.......!

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Akhtar Jawad 09 April 2016

An unique and wonderful poem..................................

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Spock The Vegan 07 April 2016

Can you spare a dime for a forty-niner?

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Kelly Kurt 07 April 2016

The look on the Loris' face says it all. : -)

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