Tuesday, May 10, 2016

Prayer-Raccoons Comments

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Of course it'll work for I've done this before
It won't take long for attention to draw

But just remember to do it in sync
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Loke Kok yee
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Mj Lemon 29 April 2018

They do really seem to know the power of prayer. I was both amused and enlightened by your verse, Loke. There are so many raccoons in my part of the world. I confess I've never seen one in prayer. I have seen a few shaking what looked like a fist (paw?) at me. A great poem.

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Simone Inez Harriman 24 June 2017

These two clever raccoons has got it sorted. They do look so appealing and cute so it's so easy to encourage them by reward. After reading Pamela's comment, I reread the poem and was surprised at the new images I got from the poem without the title and picture.

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Loke Kok Yee 25 June 2017

We don't have raccoons in this part of the world but I understand that they are very intelligent and will actually beg for their food. Thanks Simone

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Akhtar Jawad 11 May 2016

Enjoyed this beautiful and amazing write.

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Kelly Kurt 10 May 2016

Another great poem/picture combo in your Prayer series. Clever raccoons. When I try this, they throw rocks : -)

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Loke Kok Yee 11 May 2016

Have you tried a striptease? ? ?

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