Prayer On My Lips Comments

A different story, the theme is very close to life. A realistic approach of a dying wife who wants to see her husband happy after her death..........................10

WOW! This poem put me through a wringer. But as Shakespeare wrote. ALL'S WELL THAT ENDS WELL. That phrase is very appropriate because there is so much pain ans suffering that even the truest love cannot assuage but here the suffering leads to joy and this wife who in the midst of her loss and terminal pain, thinking about her husband's future is remarkable. What an act of love your poem celebrates. This is the true story that can prepare us for such an experience. Publish this one in the Sunday bulletin so that people can see it in the right context.