Prayer In Space Gaols Comments

Fill the darkness of stellar distances with light! Make me limitless! ............................................... it's so fine... Naseer, 10 .... Tsira

What an amazing spiritual poem! Some of my favorite images here are these: 'The blue sky signifies the holiness Of your sleep' And 'Sounds are but the seranata of your silences You are the ocean of lyrics' Also: 'Fill the darkness of stellar distances with light! Make me limitless! ' the ending is esp. powerful.

thoughtful eloquence that penned beautifully! 10+

Simply Loving poem....(**********) 10+

sincerity of prayer is what matters

Your spiritual insight is such a creed that is reaches with such distance across all lands and oceans, your words are such a blessing to the eyes and to the mind but most of all the heart and soul. Thank you

Once again I read a spiritual dimension in your work which reaches across boundries and creed. Thank you.

I think you spelled goal wrong. I fthat is how its suppose to be I'm sorry. Your poem is great

it's so beatiful...! and touch my heart.. moved my feel deeply! >< i love your poems...

nice prayer indeed and the image of the space filled with luminosity and darkness nice flow of words 10+

I can here the subtle symphony playing on the swaying lights of the sky. so beautiful and tranquil are your words.

i really like this one very nicely penned 10+++ definatly

'My life span is but a shred of your continuum' U have written beautifully Sir :) The above line has been one of my strongest views about this soul and body! The soul remains the same, its just the body tht changes. :)

THIS IS A NICE POEM I LOVE IT VERY SO MUCH INDEED I DO IT WAS WHAT I WAS LOOKING 4 I LOVE IT 10+ ON THIS I LOVE IT

great thoughts..striking..touching... a very wonderful prayer... thoughts in words are so meaningful...uplifting prayer... God is Love...Love is God God is in you... 10+++++ lovelots, maia

Yes Nasir you are so right we are all but a moment in His endless millennia. Would it that it be we could all come to unerstand our powerlessness as you have.

this again is a beautiful write indeed sir! ! ! ! great write! ! great words of wisdom10++ with love shan

This is a sublime poem! Each line is a treasure! !

Each line is filled with beauty in expression and conveys the humbleness of human against the expanse of universe. A superb piece of writing, Naseer.10 plus.

i feel a lil better....just gave your poem a 10..please be so kind as to read...your favorite place, in front of the t.v