Saturday, March 26, 2016

Prayer-Dog Comments

Rating: 5.0

Son of Osiris- - - - - - - - - - -and guardian of us all
What may be the reason- - - - -I am born so small

Chasing cats a pleasure- - - -that I've been denied
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Loke Kok yee
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 September 2017

A dog prayer - ha ha ha! Loke, you are indeed, a master of humour! Do it right and proper- - - - -the next time around All dogs to be equal- - - - - - - -the size of a hound Great! 10++

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Akhtar Jawad 16 May 2017

Enjoyed this interesting poem, nice write.

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Loke Kok Yee 16 May 2017

Hope you had a good laugh!

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Spock The Vegan 26 March 2016

Excellent poem with fun picture...10

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Rajnish Manga 26 March 2016

Thank you so much for this interesting poem which meanders through the mythological creatures and a wonderful narrative. Thanks, Loke.

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Simone Inez Harriman 26 March 2016

I love it! ! ! ....and the little dog earnestly at prayer made me laugh out loud. 'All dogs to be equal'...gorgeous...10

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