Wednesday, April 13, 2016

Prayer-Brown Hare Comments

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Goddess of the forest- - - - - - - -hear my prayer
Is it feeding foxes- - - - - - - - - why we are here?

Throughout the year- - - -four litters we produce
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Loke Kok yee
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Simone Inez Harriman 25 April 2016

That hare definitely has his prayers answered with what he does best. Four litters a year...wow

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M Asim Nehal 18 April 2016

Wow, I see rhyme, flow, humour and a prayer all in one....Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem, Loke..100+++

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Valsa George 14 April 2016

You specialize in certain areas and you are best at it. The graphics that you choose to go with your poems too are excellent!

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Akhtar Jawad 14 April 2016

A nice humor, lok kok yee is proficient in writing such poems.

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Kelly Kurt 13 April 2016

Of course, bunnies would pray to be able to be able to procreate. It's what do best. : -)

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