Tuesday, April 1, 2008

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The pounding of hearts when to lovers meet,

the anger in the brow with enemies in the street,
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racheal wiese
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Paul Buttigieg 12 April 2008

You have to ensure if you want your writing to endure that you spell correctly. One of the things readers of good poetry like is that at least basic english spelling is achieved. Try and remember the people who really love poetry also like your skills of presentation. Poor spelling means poor insight into your own poems. I hope you realise I am only being critical because you have a lot of talent........spelling correctly should be a given if you wish to be a writer well read.

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Scott Austin 01 April 2008

This is an excellent prayer young lady, may he watch over you and protect you from harm each and everyday. May your heart be filled with peace and joy each and everyday. Scott

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