Thursday, July 12, 2007

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She hides herself behind a wall
Somewhere she can not fall
The floor goes out
She falls down but no one knows
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Kaitlyn Bell
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Nice poem and surprising endings.

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Blue angel Florida 29 July 2007

What a surprizing ending, really emotional, thank you!

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Jemarie Ragudo 12 July 2007

I like poems like yours that addresses the spiritual realm.

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