Thursday, April 25, 2019

Prayer Comments

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Why do we always look to the skies
When we can't find the answers around us?
What are these inexplicable ties
That have encumbered our minds and bound us?
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Lora Colon
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Sandra Feldman 26 April 2019

I think your right. Salvation is here, not in the sky, there, not even clouds are saved, in rain they die or are blown away by the wind. The last stanza is quiet enlightening, realistically truthful. 'tears only fall upon human hearts'. The difficulty resides in finding the right ones. True friends, not many. This is and extraordinarily sincere and brave work, plus excellently written. Quite unforgettable.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 April 2019

Although we do not find any answers still we look at the sky. We find beauty and we feel the gladness and expression of love and unity. This poem is very nice and interesting. We are linked to teach each other. It is true that true friends help us. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.10

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