Wednesday, December 30, 2015

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Oh Lord! Listen to our hearts
Battered and bruised in life's race
Years passing by, in the blink of an eye
Our hands are now full, now empty
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Nosheen Irfan
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 November 2022

Very timely Nosheen I feel this way at this time of the year tfs

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David Wood 18 November 2022

This is a prayer and a poem. Yes, life is full of mistakes and regrets sometimes forgiven sometimes not, but we have to learn from our mistakes and make amends.

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Aufie Zophy 17 November 2022

I personally feel that the prayers we write ourselves are the most valuable ones. They come straight from our heart. This is a beautiful one!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2017

Oh, Lord! Make the rising sun a gentle one For every soul that has stood the test of time From moments to years, the tide has turned The gone is gone, the lost is lost for sure Tick, tick! No stopping the hands of clock... nice theme. Beautiful poem on prayer.

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Daniel Brick 02 February 2017

NEW YEAR AHEAD, SORROWS BEHIND - What a fine sentiment to end with not just hope but accessible hope. We pray because we must, but also because we can. We must pray because we are limited creatures and need divine help - that need is part of our human nature; and the fact we can pray makes it an expression of our nature, an assertion of our identity, an accord with the Universe. You poem made me think these thoughts, and I'm happy they are in my mind. There are so many terrible things that snake their way into the temple of our minds, we need these prayerful thoughts to protect it. The flow of your song, the lilies you gather, the directions you give - these are the benefits of your poetic prayers, we are grateful as well as the Beings of Light above us.

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Abduhoo Salamath 21 August 2016

Aameen ya rabbal Aalameen..very nice Dua..may Allah accept all our good deeds and needs.

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As refreshing as a river is you prayer my dear friend!

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Akhtar Jawad 14 January 2016

A beautiful prayer, a beautiful poem.................................

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M Asim Nehal 31 December 2015

Aameen, Summa Aameen, May Almighty fulfil all your cherished dream and give u the best in this world and hereafter....

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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