The childhood’s innocence ended,
When with him, you blended.
Now it remains a far away memory,
Of imitating your mother in a red sari.
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The intricacies, care, pain... of motherhood are well depicted in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Sanika. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Thank you so much for commenting. it is really a motivation for young poets like me.
Wow! This is a powerful poem about women. So sad and tragic, yet hopeful. You've conveyed the plight of women very effectively. Thanks for sharing.
dear friend its really good poem the way you expressed each and every feeling elevated your poem! keep writing and sharing dear! all the emotions are clearly and beautifully expressed! nice job sanika!
thanks a lot for commenting pranayee! !