Monday, September 14, 2009

Prayer 2 Comments

Rating: 4.6

The sun is Your smile
I smile big in the sun
The moon is Your tip of the teeth
I wonder at the beauty of the moon
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Bhaswat Chakraborty
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Jen Capaldi 11 October 2009

The oceans are Your sight Far, deep & kind I dive deep – very deep In the oceans of consciousness Love is Your Being I love to be in Your Love forever! very creative verses. imaginative association of giving persona to the spiritual and deep love expressed. very well penned my friend. Jen

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Aparna Sinha 25 September 2009

Love is Your Being I love to be in Your Love forever - I even put these lines as my gtalk status once (with your name!) I sometime read them the moment you post them

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C. P. Sharma 18 September 2009

In dedicated heart all these reside. CP

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Noel Horlanda 16 September 2009

Good imagery, designating one self to every part of the universe and at the end a comparison of each between self and nature. Well penned.10+

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Indira Babbellapati 14 September 2009

an interesting prayer indeed!

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 14 September 2009

All My Respect/ what a beautiful Lord! Prayer 1 & Prayer 2 come to an agreement: GOD is EVERYWHERE, GOD is BEAUTIFUL.

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Joseph Poewhit 14 September 2009

The oceans are a swirl of emotions

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