Tuesday, July 26, 2011

Prayer Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am dissapointed for I'm the only hopless.
Just as a simple being on a burden mountain.
Neither can climb nor fly to the branches.
This weiry feel of light flashing through mind.
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VIPINS PUTHOORAN
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Harindhar Reddy 13 February 2012

Hello! Maharaja of words, Again you are creating magnificent picture in my mind if it contains hear-trenching lines like these. I wonder you mastery over words you, lexicographer! 10++++ A weiry feel of light flashing through mind. Like dead wood floating over water without reaching a shore.

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Jacqui Broad 27 October 2011

Your prayer is very touching. It seems to have come from a time of great desparity. I hope looking back now, the Lord had given you that miracle..

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Walterrean Salley 26 October 2011

Speaks to the hopelessness of countless, bringing a ray of hope. Very inspirational.

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No Ones Bidness 07 October 2011

Really shows how hopeless the writer felt while writing it.Cu dos! ! ! !

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Nanthinii Mohan 23 September 2011

Definetely you are blessed....excellent..... well write.....

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Swarnendu Biswas 29 July 2011

In the fifth line, by the slip of pen reaching becomes raeching.yah! I agree with u, even in great disappointment one should not go astray, rather better to pray to our mighty lord-only he can do smthng miraculous.

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Hans Vr 26 July 2011

Nice expression of great faith.

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