It makes me sleepless
Her face suddenly rushes
To appear before my vision
I remain perturbed with confusion
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Nancy Fillip3 minutes ago The mix up of tenses made it less poetic although you had some good lines. Thanks for sharing. Nancy Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago some sentences are of present way of thinking and rest are of the past.. feel poetry well
Nice Allan Molina2 minutes ago Is that love? Comment +1 Prayed