Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, September 12, 2013

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It makes me sleepless
Her face suddenly rushes
To appear before my vision
I remain perturbed with confusion
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2013

Nice Allan Molina2 minutes ago Is that love? Comment +1 Prayed

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2013

Nancy Fillip3 minutes ago The mix up of tenses made it less poetic although you had some good lines. Thanks for sharing. Nancy Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago some sentences are of present way of thinking and rest are of the past.. feel poetry well

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2013

It makes me sleepless Her face suddenly rushes

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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