Tuesday, October 9, 2012

Pray Sincerely Comments

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There may exist various types of lamps
They'd have been from different camps.

They may exist made of various materials
They may be made for the Imperials.
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chandra thiagarajan
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Terence George Craddock 21 October 2012

Beautifully written with insight, an exquisitely crafted poem. I enjoyed the thought and wonderful examples selected to illustrate the beauty of your poetic choices. All forms of lamps from their foundation Emit the same brilliant illumination. This is beautifully written. I also have pondered upon light and light sources. The cliche concept all are different yet all give the same light. I concluded this generalization is flawed. I concluded different fuels, qualities of wax, liquid light sources, give different intensities of light. Especially in the spiritual illumination differentiates souls, Buddha, Christ, Mahatma Gandhi were pure flames, pure souls; in comparison their completed enlightened lives, make most base mortals share some life horror failings, similar to hate rage foul flames of beast Hitler dark souls; not all aspire to the divine, pray with sincere heart soul.

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Neela Nath Das 12 October 2012

Very appropriate. We should be sincere in our effort to reach our goal.

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