Thursday, September 4, 2008

Pray For Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you whisper the melody of your tears
Among green prayers of your hands for years
Pray for me
I'm deaf and blind but kind, remove my fears
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 14 January 2009

Yet another great write from you and it seems so sincere too. Keep up the good work. :)

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toruk macto 24 September 2008

I love how it rhymes... :)

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Patricia Bankhead 19 September 2008

Wonderful write! We all need prayers. Thanks for sharing. Pat~

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... ... 17 September 2008

I like it because it sounds musical. Lovely writing! Miss you!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 September 2008

A wonderful short poem: Pray for me. Very nice.

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Koyel Mitra 10 September 2008

Excellent, spiritual poem.A full 10 for you.

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Chitra - 08 September 2008

spiritual in tone, deep thinking here

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mashallah... you're really a poet with this poem short but awesome...thanks for sharing.. best regards, joan d.h.

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Sarah Abdullah 06 September 2008

When you whisper the melody of your tears Among green prayers of your hands for years Very Good and the prayers Are for every living Soul on Earth Thx for sharing ^_^

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Sathyanarayana M V S 06 September 2008

We all pray for you my friend. This is very touching piece from you

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 September 2008

yeah, I pray for u dear nightingle of shiraz your love would be yours. I donno wy cant click 10...option is inactive. anyway Allah bless U

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Tsira Goge 05 September 2008

Nightingale you sing closed by eyes, differently you cannot sing... On it at you it is a lot of enemies, especially at night... You are kind also the god with you... 10... Tsira

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Anjali Sinha 04 September 2008

shiraz, so beautiful! ! ! ! melody of tears deaf and blind but love be eyes and ears. +10 to you and this goes to my fav list. regards anjali

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Thad Wilk 04 September 2008

Ahh, she's the one to remove your fears Her love shall be, your eyes and ears! Great read Shiraz! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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M M 04 September 2008

A beautiful poem, both short and meanful. The short center of the poem -'pray for me'-, circled by longer lines gives a real strenght to your thought. Very well penned! 10

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Pandora Chaos 04 September 2008

short but sweet, nice... keep up the great work

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Hela Jug 04 September 2008

a beautiful poem. it's nice reading your poems again. take care

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Very direct and right to the point of spiritual revelation.I gave you a ten for being straight from the heart and wise.

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