Tuesday, August 8, 2006

Pray For Forgiveness Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish things were different,
I wish it had not happened,
those memories of chilhood, the love we shared,
growing up together, but were we prepared?
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Linda Ori 29 August 2006

Excellent description of someone who just doesn't get it. They have different priorities - greed and self-gratification, maybe because they don't know any better. But part of us still wants to help them, even though they have to want to be helped first. That's the hard part of letting go. Heartfelt write, Arti. Linda

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Catastrophe King 08 August 2006

If he reads this and if he is there....... he has to come back. This is well written and has all the purity of romance within you. I admire the talent and skills that are displayed in between the lines. Good work indeed. Nothing but 10.

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