Pray For Dawn Comments

Great poem from beginning to end but I found the contradictions in the first stanza particularly effective... amazingly insightful and brilliantly written!

Will, this is a beautifully scribed, pensive, perfectly flowing composition, with its compelling imperative at the end. t x

The last stanza of your poem is really superb. I join you in your prayer for dawn. Praise for your eloquent pen. Your poetess friend, Sandra

Somewhere, in a small town, neighbors, Ones who knew the victims - these Well-meaning ones offer their tears, But there is no substitute for peace. Ring bells, but whisper prayers: For those left behind; theirs Is the burden, to go on: For them, pray for dawn. I see strands of light shining from that dawn in your words Will What a briliant poem of prayer Shine on my friend Love duncan X