Wednesday, July 24, 2013

Pray Do Not Pick The Daffodils (Re-Submission) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pray do not pick the daffodils
Their life has just begun,
Oh let them live as nature meant,
Stood dancing ‘neath the sun
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Valerie Dohren
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Bishakha Alam 08 July 2018

This is an amazing poem. I love it and conveys a lot of meaning.

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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2013

Thanks for discovering this lost gem and re-offering to us, it's simply marvelous! Every line touches the heart.10/10. Quite agree with the comments of Thomas A Robinson, Sandra Feldman, Lyn Paul, Lucifera Santez, Kavya, Loraine Colon and Davis Wood.

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Mary Forrester 23 August 2013

Simple but beautiful Valerie

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Juan Olivarez 07 August 2013

Lovely write. Great poem.

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Soulful Heart 04 August 2013

nature indeed hs been taken for gra nted by us....pure human selfishness should b curbed by us.....good write..

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Neela Nath Das 30 July 2013

I also believe, the flowers look beautiful when they stay with their mother i.e plant.Your writes are fabulous Val.You know I adore them.

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Danny Draper 28 July 2013

I remember this poem and commenting on it. The comment verbatim escapes me, but in essence it was good with a fine message and remains thus.

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Shahzia Batool 28 July 2013

a sign of a gentle heart...this taking care of nature in this delicate manner...i hope you must have found BONDING on my page similar to this one of yours! beautiful work!

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Sandra Feldman 27 July 2013

Preserve the joy that Nature gives Just feast your eyes as Beauty, lives This is what I think you so beautifully said, gave me a deep feeling of peace and joy. A spiritual union with Nature, felt human again, thank you

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Kavya . 27 July 2013

wat a noble thought.....unfortunately not all think this way and ultimately the beautiful flowers get plucked to be decorated on their own tables

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G.R. Gaus 25 July 2013

Your poems of nature are well stated and very well understood, just returned from a two week deck building adventure at my sons house to find our flower garden ravished by varmints. Pray do not eat my daffodils? ? ? ?

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Lorraine Colon 25 July 2013

Enjoyed this so much. Glad you re-submitted it. It's not a poem you want to lose.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 July 2013

Beautiful poem about nature and its beauty. See and enjoy. I would have missed a great one if you did not resubmit. Thank you.

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Kevin Halls 24 July 2013

Someone may have plucked it and run off with it Val! Don't worry this one looks well planted and your sure to get good comments too.

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Payal Parande 24 July 2013

oh! how wonderful, your poetry always flow like a peaceful breeze, just beautiful ma'am a well crafted piece

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Stephan O''Rielly 24 July 2013

The dissappearing poem became a flower and was plucked from your collection

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Patricia Grantham 24 July 2013

This is oh so beautiful Valerie. I love flowers but they are really beautiful when they are not picked. There is something about them as they flow back and forth with the wind as the sun shines brightly upon them. Enjoyed.

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Lyn Paul 24 July 2013

mother earths beauty is not apreciated by all unfortunately but your poem most certainly is.

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Terry M 24 July 2013

Makes me want to grow some flowers for sure, well done and well put. Keep up the good work!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 24 July 2013

a beautiful thought expressed in astonishing simplicity!

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