Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Pranked(Sonnet) Comments

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I saw a lady sweet and fair,
I saw her wearing white,
With eyes as blue and sweet as care,
She walked the adouring light.
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OTONYE DANIEL
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Rose Flores 03 July 2012

Yeah! It's adorable! Thanks for sharing the poem. A blessed evening.

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 27 June 2012

It's a tipping sonnet indeed. Well-penned!

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Joseph Poewhit 28 May 2012

You will be an old man one day. People are people, BUT, a pretty girl turns heads. - BRAVO

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Captain Cur 24 May 2012

Aye! All that glitters is not gold. However, she seemed a well dressed, kind, intelligent though elderly woman. I am after all almost 400 years old. Did you happen to get her number. Nice poem with a fitting title.

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Its like a song....its nice...and easy to understand especially with the ending line. I reckon this as a free verse....but with a rhyme scheme of abab cdcd efef gg....its nice...simple and nothing more

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OTONYE DANIEL

OTONYE DANIEL

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