Wednesday, February 5, 2014

Praise The Tears Comments

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I think I'm going to be okay
Inch by inch, day by day
My heart's been broken times before
The pieces strengthened in my core.
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Katelin Taylor
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 27 November 2014

I'll be alright. I know this much Broken down by the Master's touch Malleable, willing to bend in His hands I'll be okay. Lord, what are Your plans? A beautiful heartfelt poem which moved me a lot.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 27 November 2014

I'll be alright. I know this much Broken down by the Master's touch Malleable, willing to bend in His hands I'll be okay. Lord, what are Your plans? A beautiful heartfelt poem which moved me a lot.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Marisa Eutsler 02 May 2014

fantastic! so talented and this poem so true

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Katelin Taylor 10 February 2014

Thank you Kwame! Most of my poetry rhymes and I like that about it. It's just how the thoughts flow out of me. I don't have to try.

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Kwame Sarfo Aboagye 07 February 2014

I admire modernist poets that rhyme in their poems. It's difficult to achieve that, along with other literary devices, so many of us shy away from it. Big ups.

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Katelin Taylor 06 February 2014

Thank you Elias :) I am a little proud of that line haha.

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Md Elias Uddin 06 February 2014

My tears are friends to me by now They comfort me as they fall down. Nice expression!

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