Prairie Of Fairy Comments

Thank you Ahmad for dedication! ! ! Best regards! Dorota Szumilas

like asking a girl to 'Come live with me and be my love, / And we will some new pleasures prove' (Christopher Marlowe) . nice effort.

Thats was soo pretty your a really good at writing

oh! very exciting poem.nice brave words.why not write 'Oh'H instead of 'O'.posted 10 for you surya

It is a nice flowery poem!

hi ahmad its a very very nice poem...full of life and exuberance of youth and spring really enjoyed it its atenner cheers

Each word takes us to that strange fairy land.

Reading this makes me feel I am in a scented garden - - -the presentation is unusual in that it has unequal metre and rythmn but the dreamy sense when read aloud is overwhelming - - super write.....10 from Fay.