Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Practice Before Ye Preach Comments

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Peace can't be sown on barren poverty field,
Like faith can't be put in food dreaming mind,
How much blood and tears needed to bind,
Cultivation without water and manure for yield!
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Geetha Jayakumar 30 October 2014

Thoughtful poem from your pen. Very true said....This is the time to think and rethink- what we want? Yes, we need peace. Great message. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Babatunde Aremu 30 October 2014

They are all hypocrites preaching peace but They Sowed Guns (one of my poems) . They are all pretenders. Great write. I can feel the passion of the poet.

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Salini Nair 30 October 2014

Peace can't be sown on barren poverty field, Like faith can't be put in food dreaming mind, ......................great lines...enjoyed reading

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2014

Very truly said everything in this poem. Yes this is the time to think and rethink about life and style. The holy earth is ever victorious. Very wonderful and nice poem.

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Hazel Durham 29 October 2014

Great message in this beautifully written poem so powerful and true!

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Shabeeh Haider 29 October 2014

Indeed time to think and rethink. Wonderfully written

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