Tuesday, July 7, 2020

Practice #2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Well it was getting pretty late,
Still had dirt across my face,
Took a visit to the line that shone like steel.
Now every other breath
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Bryony Sheldon
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 August 2020

A deep personal muse, poetically cryptic in a sensational way. I can't be sure what it denotes but it is nice even without being too clear. Thumbs up! Plz do read and comment your thoughts on my newest prose titled, " face veils/face masks same thing " as it fosters an understanding of the shared veiling practice btw east and west since history.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 July 2020

A unique and thought provoking write. Only a Poetess with great imagination can weave and deliver this kind of theme. " I yearn for all those things that I can't feel" . A powerful line from a marvelous poem. Beautifully crafted with compelling imagery.

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Sandra Feldman 07 July 2020

Ah, the irrepressible and uncontrollable kingdom of Love, where Aphrodite is Queen! Wanting to love and not loving, is what this poem says. Quite different, yet, fantastically attractive and alluring.

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