Friday, December 22, 2017

Power To Choose Comments

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you can stay on the bottom
or you can rise to the top
you can be the scum of the earth
or you can be the cream of the crop
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Dorsey Baker
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Practicing Poetess 22 December 2017

Words of truth, in poetic form. Dorsey, the title AND the theme of your poem are strikingly similar to two of my older poems, 'You Can Choose' and 'Voices and Choices' (the 2nd one having been written in the form of a dialogue between persons.) You may want to take a look at mine. There must be something in the air that causes poets on this site to come up with similar ideas! I never tend to suggest my poems to others, but in this case the likeness is remarkable.

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Practicing Poetess 22 December 2017

Words of truth, in poetic form. Dorsey, the title AND the theme of your poem are strikingly similar to two of my older poems, 'You Can Choose' and 'Voices and Choices' (the 2nd one having been written in the form of a dialogue between persons.) You may want to take a look at mine. There must be something in the air that causes poets on this site to come up with similar ideas! I never tend to suggest my poems to others, but in this case the likeness is remarkable.

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Bradley Howington 22 December 2017

Very powerful piece. Love it!

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