Power Of Vigour Comments

Wonderful sing-song way of conveying. :)

A mighty downpour of good poetry capsuled in the typical Mehtian way! The very essence of the poem is the right blend of rhythm and apt words used in conveying an idea of immaculate observation.

Fantastic. Great thoughts and spiritual guide. Alas final is oblivion. But excellent poem. Thanks for reference.

I love your style of writing..its unique..Nice poem..and what you've conveyed is so true...

Enjoyed greatly the alliterative diction! Good work! !

apart from the rhythmic sound, the message is very clear and understood! Where can they be figured in the history? It is a good question..Sanjay Mehta..10

good rhyming and well presented..!

brilliant..............

Loved the resonant sound of the poem. It has enhanced the beauty of the poem.

thnk you for drawing my attention to this poem. the sound has enhanced the beauty of the poem.

Thought provoking and a good write. Thanks for sharing

Be riley, be good But don't forget the not riley! ! ! They are aroud.......

Poems are composed either out of intuition or the artistry.Here what you wanted to achieve, you have successfully done it. The concentration is mostly on resonant sounds and it helps create a thematic connection too. A good conscious effort..thanks for the invitation to read it...