Power Of The Rose Comments
Think of a rose…
You see its beauty; you see how others react to it.
You know the meaning it represents and you know the worth people give it
So, whenever someone receives a rose, the thorns usually gets cut just enough for the receiver to hold the flower, just enough for them to ignore the thorns and admire the rose
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A refined poetic imagination, Renee Maritz. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
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7/21/2025 5:14:29 PM # 1.0.0
Not a poem. Saying a piece of writing is 'Free Verse' does not make it so. The idea is sound. The concepts are confused. The rose is part of a push, as are the thorns, the thorns are not part of the rose. That concept alone makes the thinking behind the piece of writing muddled. You are far better than this. Take it down and rework it. - But the thing is - for example - totally superfluous phrase. Go look at the next rose bush you see and think again.