I believed the shedding
Of your crocodile tears...
Think me not stupid,
Only know me once naive.
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love, friendship, separation, realization of love, a different life, couple. i remain pure in my thoughts still. you are welcome, but in a different way. very nice poem. thank your dear poet. tony
Thank you Barry And yeah I know I can edit I just am too lazy to do so hahaha
Thank you Barry And yeah I know I can edit I just am too lazy to do so hahaha
You know you can edit? Click submit a poem and then edit or delete, find your title and click edit. Still gets a 10!
You made me wiser, And the heartache was a real eye-opener. Well-written! With its simplicity, honesty and directness, this poem best expresses the triumph of the soul over pain that comes from betrayal. Wish You good luck.
thank you for your comment dear Xx