Friday, April 29, 2016

Power Of Forever Comments

Rating: 5.0

I believed the shedding
Of your crocodile tears...
Think me not stupid,
Only know me once naive.
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Kim Aouad
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Istabraq Al Ahmadi 20 June 2016

You made me wiser, And the heartache was a real eye-opener. Well-written! With its simplicity, honesty and directness, this poem best expresses the triumph of the soul over pain that comes from betrayal. Wish You good luck.

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Kim Aouad 21 June 2016

thank you for your comment dear Xx

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 April 2016

love, friendship, separation, realization of love, a different life, couple. i remain pure in my thoughts still. you are welcome, but in a different way. very nice poem. thank your dear poet. tony

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Kim Aouad 30 April 2016

Thank you Barry And yeah I know I can edit I just am too lazy to do so hahaha

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Barry Middleton 29 April 2016

Very good poem on ending relationship.

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Kim Aouad 30 April 2016

Thank you Barry And yeah I know I can edit I just am too lazy to do so hahaha

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Kim Aouad 29 April 2016

I meant *mention** 😁

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Barry Middleton 29 April 2016

You know you can edit? Click submit a poem and then edit or delete, find your title and click edit. Still gets a 10!

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Kim Aouad

Kim Aouad

Beirut, Lebanon
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