Tuesday, March 10, 2020

Power Enshrined In Ruin Comments

Rating: 5.0

Seated on a colossal throne,
A skeleton, its past glory
Displayed on its iron sepulcher
Arrayed and elegantly clothed;
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Khairul Ahsan 30 August 2020

'With lipless smile and regal frame Lightly covered by drifting snow, All around him signs of decay, Filled with his one last frozen breath This king a grueling spectacle Of power enshrined in ruin' - An excellent imagery of a gone-by power, 'enshrined' in ruin. The caption is so appropriate! The poem gets 10/10 from me.

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Kesav Easwaran 22 March 2020

How nicely you describe the lost glory using contrasting words! Eloquent poetry, as always 10+

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Kostas Lagos 11 March 2020

A skeleton on his throne.What mysteries does he guard? Excellent poem!

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