Power Comments

time is the most powerful mystery along with space, so this is a magical box, things to be placed in space and time acts, things reformed. in this space + time box, they can't catch the One Who is also here, the Great Player. beautiful rhyming and philosophical.

I love the tacit power of this poem. To me it brings out the truth about power. It never is verbose, but is. The images are terse, but powerful. Thanks

Poetry concentrates the power of the essential. This is a very powerful poem denoting the fragility of All versus Time. Excellently said in a very original way.

This poem has power but can time devour it? Now you have propelled my mind into thoughts of cave dwelling men who painted their heroic hunting of the local prey and here we are ages since able to see those works of art- - except they are closing these caves off to visitors- -the breath we breathed in stunned appreciation is destroying them... so how long can our writings captured on memory sticks survive time? Power - - very intriguing poem

Nothing lasts forever. But the loss of power with time is most painful. Very nice.

Power weans through time, so will prowess and these could pose at imagined threats. Much to be fathomed between these lines you have written. Thank you, wonderful writing.

Time will devour What is power philosophical.. use of words and rhyming. very nice poem. love to read it. tony