Friday, April 10, 2009

Power....? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm tired of the pain
you've been forcefeeding me.
Drowning in the mind
that you left broken.
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Paulina Varela
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Jazib Kamalvi 30 June 2020

Such a nice poem, P. V. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Alison Cassidy 11 April 2009

An assertive, feminist poem that stands up for itself. You reveal the pain of the past without resorting to self-consciousness and stand tall as your pronounce your affirmations for a positive future. Great write. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Paulina Varela

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