Poverty Comments

Oho.... yes Poverty is continues to be a large problem

Machiko is best Waifu period

A brilliant ending to a simple poem. Beautifully done, Konjit! ! Brian

WOW, I dunno what to say, except that, that was a beautiful poem. Poverty affects all of us in some way. That was a great write, Never quit writing, Smiles N Hugs Willow: -)

I've been reading through quite a lot of your poetry, Konjit, and I find it fresh and young but at the same time much of it is deep and holds a message. I will continue to read it. I like this one for its simpliciity and for the last two lines, which finish it off brilliantly. Love, Fran xx

simple as it shold be.nice poem konjit.

All the more moving for its simplicity. The stark truth needs no elaboration. Well done, Konjit. Love Eve x

Hope so, but honestly I think it's going to get worse. Moyax

I like to think so Konjit...dave pray! ! ! Love dave xxxx

Excellent piece of reality

simple, honest, to the point and beautiful. thanks

I think Chirs gave good advice that I should learn myself, that said, I enjoyed this poem, the message about how people suffer in the world is very important and the way you expressed it using family members made me feel it as I read it.

i´d really loved this one, it´s, i don´t know, well it´s real and sad and true.... anyway, i think we have the same prob writting, i always use rhymes i already know or that i´ve heard in songs and that makes my writing boring, it´s almost the same everytime.... anyway, i liked your poems much more than mine, you´re gonna be a great writter some day, just keep going :)