Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Poverty Comments

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On a silk rug
A group of ants
Scurrying arround each other
Found a seed
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Leila Taghavi
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Afzal Shauq 11 April 2010

lovely idea and romantic way of writing.fantastic one

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Kee Thampi 11 March 2010

we made it seed of sin here, A group of ants Scurrying arround each other Found a seed

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