Swarms of ants
Spotted dead
Starving for food
Stocked grains
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Here in the U.K. we often moan that we struggle to get by but when we see the poverty in other parts of the World we don't know how lucky we are. Alas poverty and the poor will always be with us, but that doesn't mean it's right! Well done Vijay on touching on this in your poem.
nice shot brother i like it man.very very nice.wow
Do you remember that Indian song? Dunya main kitna gham hai mera gham kitna km hai? ? ? ? ? Really true..... One child weeps for burger or a precious toy and the their are parents who can not supply food to their children. This is a reality based poem Mark Sallen Indian poverty has not gone to that extent. Love it.
A good poem though considering there is so much poverty in India I would have expected a more locally based poem where numerous examples of poverty must exist? India a place where the difference between rich and poor is I am informed so very evident?
This poem is very realistic and visual. I can sense the feeling of being like this. Very good poem. Thank you for allowing me to read this. ~Desiree <3
Pain felt by those victims! fact but absurd! u can add this to your previous cries. U have been a keen crier for the mischief of man. u warned me before si i now.very itching vijay. thanks for the invite.
Excellent Vijay, The poem is Heart Rending Poverty may even lead to eating of Ants Are Missiles more important than Men? Let the Heads of states sip wine and dine Sick and starved suffer in vain and die in pain
With all the suffering in the world...I ask, will the real god reveal yourself! My heart cry out and bleed for all the innocent victims in the world, but, When, and only when we see good-ness of humanity in each other, only then, will the world be freeded from inhumane atrocities put or forced upon us. Thanks vijay for this enlighten poem...I hear your plea but question the one to whom you cry out for help.[ my own opinion, no disrepct to anyone who believes otherwise] The resolution to all of our problems lies within each...then the world becomes whole.
I'm sorry that it took me so long to finally be able to read poem. It is than a beautiful write, it is a powerful message. You are a very talented writer.