Rain falling from the sky pouring over me
The tears from my eyes pouring over me
The blood from my wound pouring over me
The fear in my heart pouring over me
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wow this poem is really deep. i like it alot. it's so strong and it sends chills through me when i read it. great job. i give it a ten
This poem is so nicely written and really is a very touching poem written with a unique style.
the heart is pouring out in this write, beautiful job, , C.B., , keep them comeing! ~~~~~~~~ PW.
NICE! I like it a lot! You have such great talent! Keep it up!