Sunday, March 21, 2010

Potrait Of The Innocents. Comments

Rating: 4.8

i sat up and looked over the vast sea,
huge water body spread over horizon,
like a well mowed British meadow,
in blue sapphire, sharp curves in,
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surya surya
COMMENTS
Veena Yadav 10 February 2011

hello Poet, its really a lovely piece penned down. nice to see u aftr a long, do tk time to go through my list 2. tk cr.

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Vinod Kumar 01 May 2010

Very Nice art with the colour of the nature, nice wave also like a Joola thanks for sharing,10+

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Vinod Kumar 01 May 2010

Very Nice art with the colour of the nature, nice wave also like a Joola thanks for sharing,10+

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Hmimi Djamel 15 April 2010

great work. it's one of those moments when poetry meets theatre. wonderfull

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Queeny Gona 14 April 2010

I enjoyed your work.Voted 10

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Indira Babbellapati 12 April 2010

by giving this title, do u mean to resurrect your days of innocence? the title is far from appropriate!

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Abhinav Baruah 07 April 2010

Nicely crafted poem... beautiful imagery.. Enjoyable read!

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Compelling and captivating potraits my friend.

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Nooruddeen Mm 02 April 2010

Nice one, pleasant to read. Good work Rdds Noor

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 02 April 2010

good. the last line superb. shan mark 10

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Joseph Poewhit 31 March 2010

Paints the picture well of innocence, with a base setting

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 March 2010

suddenly my legs moved, the pace huge and fast, took met to sea front, where large waves rushed in menacingly and crashed short of the silvery shore.........................it is simply beautiful to express the beauty of sea in words that too synchronising it with deep thoughts.. i admire your skill dear sir.....10 read mine... preference to hate... nudge to marry

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Gul naz 30 March 2010

the scene you have created is so real and the theme you have chosen is very unusual and captivating

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Dr. Sonal Chhaya 30 March 2010

Very sensual with wild imagination..lovely Thanks for sharing

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i like it... very different from others i have read. love the imagery. keep it up.

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Mamta Agarwal 30 March 2010

very vivid images, ocean, waves, rhythm, music a good setting and good company. a well sketched [portrait Surya. Mamta

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Lady Grace 30 March 2010

i haen; t seen u for a long time surya surya..where have u been? ..k, ur poem is nice as nice as the waves of the sea..nicely done..smileeeeeeeeeee

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Mandara Pookal 29 March 2010

Hey boy! One of the most beautiful and sensual poems I have ever read with fullest joy. You write with eclect and unusual sophistication that is marked with sensitivity to the feel of the reader's pride. Love your art. Thank you......mandara

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Kee Thampi 29 March 2010

we love to see this poem a berth to world of sea..... in a ship she wore soft top, the sea breeze playing cupid, struck her mild betraying her lovely frontal form, when i stood speechles, envying the lord of creation for the marvel.

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beautiful imagery and pleasant to read...keeps one engrossed...

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surya surya

surya surya

kozhikode, @chennai.india
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