Potrait Of The Innocents. Comments

hello Poet, its really a lovely piece penned down. nice to see u aftr a long, do tk time to go through my list 2. tk cr.

Very Nice art with the colour of the nature, nice wave also like a Joola thanks for sharing,10+

Very Nice art with the colour of the nature, nice wave also like a Joola thanks for sharing,10+

great work. it's one of those moments when poetry meets theatre. wonderfull

I enjoyed your work.Voted 10

by giving this title, do u mean to resurrect your days of innocence? the title is far from appropriate!

Nicely crafted poem... beautiful imagery.. Enjoyable read!

Compelling and captivating potraits my friend.

Nice one, pleasant to read. Good work Rdds Noor

good. the last line superb. shan mark 10

Paints the picture well of innocence, with a base setting

suddenly my legs moved, the pace huge and fast, took met to sea front, where large waves rushed in menacingly and crashed short of the silvery shore.........................it is simply beautiful to express the beauty of sea in words that too synchronising it with deep thoughts.. i admire your skill dear sir.....10 read mine... preference to hate... nudge to marry

the scene you have created is so real and the theme you have chosen is very unusual and captivating

Very sensual with wild imagination..lovely Thanks for sharing

i like it... very different from others i have read. love the imagery. keep it up.

very vivid images, ocean, waves, rhythm, music a good setting and good company. a well sketched [portrait Surya. Mamta

i haen; t seen u for a long time surya surya..where have u been? ..k, ur poem is nice as nice as the waves of the sea..nicely done..smileeeeeeeeeee

Hey boy! One of the most beautiful and sensual poems I have ever read with fullest joy. You write with eclect and unusual sophistication that is marked with sensitivity to the feel of the reader's pride. Love your art. Thank you......mandara

we love to see this poem a berth to world of sea..... in a ship she wore soft top, the sea breeze playing cupid, struck her mild betraying her lovely frontal form, when i stood speechles, envying the lord of creation for the marvel.

beautiful imagery and pleasant to read...keeps one engrossed...